Dear Mr. Anderson,
We really appreciate that
you felt remorseful and asked us what the problem was with our arrival.
Firstly, we had problems
with the bus company that you hired to drive us to the hotel. The bus driver
was impolite. My wife had a quarrel with him. He did not want to turn air
conditioning off. It was warm and stuffy for him, but in the back of the bus
passengers were freezing.
Somehow we survived the bus
trip, but when we came to the hotel we were surprised, unpleasantly. We
discovered that they did not have enough space in the bus for all the luggage.
So they had put some of the luggage in a small van that was 2 hours late. It
was because the tire went flat. It took the driver an hour and half to find car
shop and change it.
We came to the conclusion
that you should change the bus company, or not organize transport to the hotel
at all. Generally, we had a wonderful time in your hotel afterwards. The room
was spacious enough, comfortable and had a great view of the garden. It was
just as we expected, and more. The food was without flaws.
All in all, we have a nice
memory of your hotel, and we thank you for the free accommodation you have
offered us. We will gladly take it, probably this time next year.
Sincerely,
DrMicKey
Really great work here. The Secretary changed the tense in one sentence. Do you know why?
ReplyDeletePast perfect... I get it why.
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